Professor, William Doane

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Reviewed by: William Doane, 24 Jun 09 2:47 PM MST

Comments:
Very well done... your business plan has a nice, professional feel. Note that on your website "Service's" only has an ' when it's possessive. Congratulations!! [Final]

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Reviewed by: William Doane 13 May 09 8:52 PM MST

Comments:
The VC document is fantastic... I have some concerns about the financial statements, which I've highlighted in the attached document. some of the numbers don't seem quite right, so I'd appreciate it if you could clarify the issues I highlighted.
[Project 4]

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Reviewed by: William Doane 12 Jun 09 11:14 AM MST

Comments:
Again, very good work! You've obviously given some serious thought to the information architecture needs of your site. Your work is a pleasure to see.

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Reviewed by: William Doane 20 Jun 09 11:35 PM MST

Comments:
This looks good, Sharon. I wonder, since this document is intended only for business partners, lenders, etc, whether you could suggest your price range/project scale? -Wil

Professor, James Ivey, JIU

Thought Leadership, Argument, Credibility and Relevance:

Well done. Well researched [...] authentic and applicable. Course concepts well demonstrated. Well written. Always seek ways to improve assignments by demonstrating additional depth. Relates the course content to the assignment requirements. Uses practical application and personal examples.

Final:

Thought Leadership, Credibility, Argument, Relevance, Completeness:

All key elements of the assignment are covered in a substantive way. The content is comprehensive, accurate, and /or persuasive. The paper develops a central theme or idea, directed toward the appropriate audience. The paper links theory to relevant examples of current experience and industry practice and uses the vocabulary of the theory correctly.

Major points are stated clearly, are supported by specific details, examples, or analysis, and are organized logically. Paragraph transitions are present and logical and maintain the flow throughout the paper.

Sentences are well-constructed, with consistently strong, varied sentences. Citations of original works within the body of the paper follow guidelines. Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed.

I hope it has been educational and beneficial for you. Thanks for your great effort and contributions that really "added" to the course.

Copyediting, Eloquence, Engagement, Proprietary:

Correct spelling, grammar, punctuation. Clear and concise. Paragraph transitions are present and logical and maintain the flow throughout the paper. Sentences are well-constructed, with consistently strong, varied sentences.

Mechanics:

Well done. Professional. Fulfills JIU's APA standards and expectations as required and as necessary.

7.2: Reflection Response

Well developed reflection with the additional questions from the assignment related to bias and ethical analysis. Good analysis of the process and any sticking points. Good application to how you might respond in reality and insights that you have gained. Emotion and conscience addressed (30/30) Made two or more responses to a peer’s post with constructive comments for an above and beyond A level grade (10/10) = 40/40 Dr Ruth

8.2: Reflection Response

Thanks, Sharon - you have been a delight in class - wonderful assignments to read! Journal entries for all 8 modules are present with good content development of 2 or more entries per module week + entries in the resources list for each module. Includes entries for Module 8 that address your personal needs and resources. On time. The attached file is done in APA formatting with just a few errors in APA (some titles overcapitalized, pages would not be with book entries) and is well written. 250/260 Dr Ruth

Discussion: Ethics

Initial post refers to an article with a resulting essay on the standards of ethical practice that entrepreneurs should follow, how they should handle mistakes and remedies for failures. 35/35 Three or more comments to peers over 2 or more days; a dialogue. 15/15 = 50

Professor, Nicholson

Reviewed by Professor, Nicholson 16 Jan 09 7:20 AM MST

Comments:

Fantastic job, Sharon! Very well laid out site... easy to navigate and organized. Again, I like that you included the pseudo code in your portfolio as this is great for potential employers to see. I think it would be cool to have an example of your Action Script in your portfolio, but this was not required. I hope this portfolio proves helpful for obtaining future employment. Kathi

Comments for Advanced Scripting for Interactivity

Professor, Stephen Savage

Sharon .. I never really know what to think when I see your work .. It is at a professional level .. The analysis and communication is exact and highly professional .. and professional is not a word I have ever used to describe any other students work ... Anyway ::) Awesome! steve

Gazette Editor

Wow! What a fun web site. I really like the design, especially the sun over the logo and how it's rays show up elsewhere at the moving of the mouse. The quote is also nice, very appropriate. However, the size of the font seems small for my eyes. Also the small size of the second photo showing a stack of papers keeps me from understanding what they represent.

Keep up the good work. Even though my purpose for being here is very important I do miss being around for this exciting new development. And, yes, I did see your nice work on uploading the February newsletter to the web site.—James Smythe ( February 13, 2009)

Winterhawk Graphics, Inc.

Thanks, That website is years old and not been updated. Your new gallery website is much improved over previous ones.
Henry

WINTERHAWK GRAPHICS, Inc.

Stephen Savage

Reviewed by: Stephen Savage 29 Mar 09 5:01 PM MST

Comments:
Sharon ... It has been a pleasure watching you work and viewing your work .. I learned a lot :):):) steve

Nichelle Jamison

Sharon you just don't know how much I appreciate this.  I wanna cry because I am so grateful that you even took the time to help me and you have gone above and beyond.  I'm reading over the information now and I will keep you updated on my success.  Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!
[3/24/09]

Carol Rollick

Hi Sharon, Dana and Sue, I know you all have been working terribly hard on this web page thing, and I for one want you to know how much I appreciate it. I know how hard it is to work for ONE client, let alone a whole membership of clients! DAUNTING!!!

I am in the camp that liked the dark background and the more artsy look of the first layout, but I also didn't like the orange and frankly found the spotlight effect a little tiring after the first look. The new page is very straight-forward and will catch people specifically looking for people searching for art in Franklin, NC but it does not have any particularly eye-catching bells and whistles . So saying, I don't know but what it will do the job it is intended for. Since you are working with a handicap, financially, this may be difficult to find a solution that does it all before you all burn out. I'll look with great interest at the further development of the new design, and again, I thank you!!! Carol

Logics Key Media

Logics Key Media envisions creating value for my customers using creative digital productions that can entertain a majority of spectators through research and originality. Continue to Customer Incentives by clicking the graphic below:

Dr. Oliver Schwabe, JIU

Comments:
Hello Sharon and thank you for the submission of a solid final assignment. Your effort does bring things together nicely and demonstrates that you have been able to meet the intended course learning outcomes. As a reminder these were: - Identify innovative telecommunications solutions suitable for use in a specific organization.
Develop an implementation plan to introduce new telecommunications solutions successfully in a specific organization. - Present innovative communication service technologies to stakeholders in a convincing manner. As you move forward the most important thing to remember is that the course has provided you with some fundamental insights into innovation, these are however only starting blocks and will always need to be seen in the light of context. All the best in your future course and success in your endeavors - it has been a pleasure working with you. Cheers Oliver

Enterprise Innovation and Technology